8 XXX : doujinshi

This was originally done by someone else (Kimochi-san), but their translation, typesetting, and overall quality was rather bunk so I gave it a shot myself. It's still based on their google translate-translation, but revised into readability. I've never done anything but proofread before, so I'm quite anxious to see what people think of this. Hope you like it!
Something entirely different. I like!